You know it is true: everything,
sound, smell and color were more intense.
The music of every sunset meant
life imagined in future tense.
Furtive fun with the neighbor girl:
getting naked in her closet.
Animal life held fascination—
experience was not yet composite.
Childhood was made easy for us;
grown-ups could do everything.
Friends and cousins joined the chorus
Singing winter into spring—
until it turned to dry routine:
money, taxes, the hours restless . . .
times arrived where dreams were absent;
sleep eludes, and food is tasteless.
Over-analysis tends to destroy
what childhood was able to enjoy.
PROMPT 28:
The silly poem
asks a non-question:
Is contemporary verse vapid,
or have we been dumbed-down?
The proof is in the poem,
so the answer is yes.
Modern verse
is known for glibness, superficiality.
Must mannered obfuscation
override any/every message?
Truth is: one could
crank these out all day long.
beginning your poem plainly:
present no imagery vainly
confusing things for your reader.
Be clear. Don’t be a misleader.
Don’t write some stunningly brave
quirky and cryptic thing that they’ve
been bored by many times before.
Try to make your poem a door
to transcendental reflection.
Critique, mock, offer connection—
And please, please do not mention pies
Or eating them naked. (Not wise . . .)
