Top Ten

HELLO POETRY is a user-friendly and uncluttered website. It is easy to comment and message other poets. It’s a sort of lyrical Facebook without the bells and whistles. They provide a count of how many views a poem gets over time. One never knows if these stats are truthful, or just algorithmic hype, but accepting the bean counters at face value, here are my ten most-read poems since I began posting at the site in 2015. They range, top to bottom (if one believes the stats), from 40K+ views down to 9K+ views.

  John Greenleaf Whittier’s Snow-bound (1865) comes in at number one with 43K views.

Snow – Bound 

Diversity Training

Planet of the Smartphones

Jungle Smile

Betting on the Races: Dark Horse

Cuneiform: Textual Intercourse

A Chicken in Every Pol Pot

Poultry in Motion

Hung on a Psychosociolinguistic Scaffold

Christian Types in Limerick

 

Submerged

Then they shall be afraid and ashamed of Ethiopia their expectation and Egypt their glory.

 Isaiah 20:5

Pulsating freak anemones’
Protoplasmic revelation
Netherworld futilities:
Darwinistic thought-abortion.

Permanent Egyptian bondage:
Eggman dragging Pharaoh’s ark . . .
Droning superficial sondage
Rises in black light of dark.

It’s Pharoah’s sub-Erythrean grave !
Sun Ra drones within the vault;
Atonal mode that cannot save . . .
(This is all Chad Van Gaalen’s fault.)

 

 

PROMPT#1

write a poem inspired by this animated version of Seductive Fantasy by Sun Ra and his Arkestra.

I Guard the Flying Rear

 

Now the Peruvians, in collected might,
With one wide stroke had wing’d the savage flight
But their bright Godhead, in his midday race,
With glooms unusual veil’d his radiant face,
Quench’d all his beams, tho cloudless, in affright,
As loth to view from heaven the finish’d fight.
A trembling twilight o’er the welkin moves,
Browns the dim void, and darkens deep the groves;
The waking stars, embolden’d at the sight,
Peep out and gem the anticipated night…
When pious Capac to the listening crowd
Raised high his wand and pour’d his voice aloud:
Ye chiefs and warriors of Peruvian race,
Some sore offence obscures my father’s face;
What moves the Numen to desert the plain,
Nor save his children, nor behold them slain?
Fly! speed your course, regain the guardian town,
Ere darkness shroud you in a deeper frown;
The faithful walls your squadrons shall defend,
While my sad steps the sacred dome ascend,
To learn the cause, and ward the woes we fear:
Haste, haste, my sons! I guard the flying rear…

excerpt from: The Columbiad, Book III  by Joel Barlow

Inca Eclipse

Pastel Overkill

I float in stagnant waters

I hang myself in data-driven waiting rooms

First-graders forced to appreciate me

Middle-class matrons swoon:

Ubiquitous redundant art-print

Token impressionist

Sure to never offend

Blurred with bourgeois harmlessness

Smeared by some Frenchman

Who had issues with the Academy

And is no longer

Relevant.

Data-driven art:
There’s a good one for your verse.
So . . .  write a haiku