The shadorma is a six-line, 26-syllable poem (or a stanza – you can write a poem that is made of multiple shadorma stanzas). The syllable count by line is 3/5/3/3/7/5.
Lyrical Sow
As a ring of gold in a swine’s snout,
So is a lovely woman who lacks discretion.
Proverbs 11:22
Bang that thing:
Angry piano,
All black keys,
Sharps and flats;
Pull that ring out of your snout
And POUND that thing.
Then, that ring:
take it, melt it down,
make a mold,
cast a god,
and bow before your idol
(a vicious poem).
The Fib is a six-line form. But now, the syllable count is based off the Fibonacci sequence of 1/1/2/3/5/8. You can link multiple Fibs together into a multi-stanza poem, or even start going backwards after your first six lines, with syllable counts of 8/5/3/2/1/1.
Émigrée
You
left
your home
for this land
and now you live here
and complain like a hypocrite.
You rail against America
while you suck her tit:
your new mom,
this land,
your
life.
Loved the immigrant one, feel bad for the piano in the first :’D
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The irony is in the etymology:
piano (adv.) musical instruction, “softly, with little force or loudness,” 1680s, from Italian ☺
Thanks for reading, Neha.
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Yours are far superior to my attempt. I really like the first one, the piano image is striking and gives me this sense of dissonance, verscerally so, that must emerge from the scene. Not a fan of either form (I wrestled with both without much success), but truly enjoyed what you did with the prompt!
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Your readership is esteemed.
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